Write to Win (Round 8): Which animal would judge humans the most?

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Read the responses to this week’s Write to Win prompt, and choose the answer you like most.

We have prepared some exciting prizes for our top three contestants:

  • Winner: Kindle, Muji voucher and a YP certificate

  • First runner-up: Instax camera and a YP certificate

  • Second runner-up: Muji voucher and a YP certificate

Tiger

Hello, I am Tiger! As a curious learner who values knowledge, I love using writing to begin conversations within the community and engaging in fun competitions such as Write to Win. When I’m not working to finish school assignments, you can find me immersed in new cultures or exploring different areas of Hong Kong with friends.

Although this may sound unexpected, I believe lions would judge humans the most. Having unparalleled strength and potent senses, lions are known as one of the top apex predators on land. Usually known as the “king of the jungle”, they demand respect from other animals and hold immense control in the wild.

We are undoubtedly seen as weak and incapable when placed beside this recognised power of lions.

From having trouble enduring minutes without water to complaining about the temperature being too hot, humans find difficulty adapting to the most minor things.

Due to this, lions may judge us as peevish, thinking that we are never fulfilled with what we have.

Furthermore, lions would judge us for the ineffable destruction we have generated on the planet over centuries. With the exponential growth of climate change, we have never seen Earth in a condition as such, simply getting worse.

Not only have we led to the creation of wildfires and floods, but our worldwide industrialisation has also led to deforestation and the entrapment of countless wildlife. As a result of the immeasurable damage we have caused, lions, on behalf of all animals, would likely be resentful to view the decline of the precious ecosystems they call “home”.

These strong wildcats would long for us to be more friendly with the planet and lower the detrimental impacts we are erecting. Although they are known for being predators, they will still want their “animal kingdom” to coexist peacefully with sufficient resources.

Therefore, due to the strong contrast between our abilities and their much larger attachment to nature, lions would criticise us as helpless and irresponsible for our unwise actions.

Write to Win: Which characters from different books could be friends? (Round 7)

Lion

I am incredibly passionate about basketball, taekwondo, gymnastics, and many other sports, as well as music and reading. These interests have allowed me to expand my imagination to the fullest extent. I am incredibly excited to welcome you all to the world of my imagination. Please continue to support Lion!

“RUN!” Your whole herd of elephants is going back in the direction they came from. You hear some gunshots but don’t know what happened. Finally, your herd stops running. You ask your mother what happened, and she sighs. “Humans kill and poach us for trophy hunting and ivory trading. You may be too young to understand, but make sure to run as fast as you can if you see humans with a gun.”

A few days later, your mum says, “We must move away from this rainforest. The trees here are getting cut down for urbanisation.” Where is the fun in killing animals? Is our ivory worth more than our lives? Why would they take away our home? Those questions are spinning in your head.

However, you know one thing for sure. Humans are evil. You ask your mum, “We are mighty, though; why can’t we defend ourselves?” Your mum replies, “With great power comes great responsibility. We are grateful to be the strong ones of nature, so we always hope to use our abilities to establish harmony with humans. That is why some of us help them carry heavy loads on farms.”

You feel angry that humans have never respected nature or cherished peace and yell, “Our population was more than one million a century ago, but now there are less than 500,000 left. Around 70,000 die every year just because of the ivory trade!”

Any animal can criticise humanity, but why do elephants judge us the most? Power can cloud judgment. Elephants are incredibly powerful. Yet, they try to bring peace to nature. What about humans?

Sheep

Thank you so much for everyone’s support in the previous rounds; I wouldn’t have made it this far without you! Please vote for Sheep to bring more imaginative tales to life!

Cats have always been regarded as a mix of affection and superiority. Their elegant moves and coldness have led humans to perceive them as confident and graceful beings. This perception has strengthened the belief that cats consider themselves superior to humans.

Cats possess an undeniable independence. Unlike most pets, cats can think for themselves. They can clean themselves and don’t need as much attention as other animals. This independence can be perceived as dismissive and even arrogant sometimes. When a cat ignores a human, it does so with a certain dignity, leaving little doubt that they consider themselves first-rate.

Moreover, cats don’t show affection easily. They precisely select their moments of affection, ensuring their human caretakers are left yearning for their approval. Doesn’t this remind you of that picky boss or teacher who always finds something in your essay that needs to be fixed and rarely shows approval for your work? This picky affection reinforces the belief that cats believe that people are beneath them, and shouldreceive affection only when they feel like it.

Cats sometimes showcase their skills by catching and presenting prey to humans. This act can be seen as a sign of power, a reminder of their capabilities compared to seemingly clumsy humans. It is as if they proudly say, “Look what I can do. I doubt you’ll be able to do that.” In conclusion, cats’ independence, picky affection and natural hunting skills project an air of judgment and power; these are signs that they consider themselves superior to humans.

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